Hello and i will be showing u my dlo about animals in war.
Alot lot animals were in war like a horse a donkey a monkey and also a bird but there were other animals but they were mascots.
so first i will tell you about the animals and what they did.
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hi Fynn i like how you put lots of detail about all the animals that went to war i also like how you put what the animals did in war and i also like how you put that the monkeys brag more stuff then the dogs
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